Publisher: Slloyd14
As a lowly temp for an insurance company, you dream that one day, your life will change. And one day, it does. You get charged with terrorism and stripped of all assets and social standing. Now you must navigate the dystopian world of England in 2041 to survive whilst the leaders of the New Order of Worlds, or NOW, enjoy lives of unlimited luxury, far away on their space station.
Will you ever discover why you were accused of terrorism? Will you survive as an outcast and will you discover who rules the NOW?
This is the playtest version as I want to check that it reads well and that there are no mistakes. If anyone has any time to playtest it, these are the following things I am looking for:
Spelling and grammar errors
Consistency with the characters - do they have the same background and jobs. Does the relationship feel logical?
Resolve score - every time your Resolve score might hit 0, you should be able to turn to an end section. Let me know if your Resolve hits 0 but there is no such section.
Missed hyperlinks
Many thanks for supporting me on this journey. After 9 years since its conception and many changes, I can honestly say that I feel...relieved.
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